Sweethearts in the Rain

Wearing

my weatherproof

coat I wait in the rain.

Though my fingers feel so waxy,

soaking up the rain, they

need to touch you

again.

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One response to “Sweethearts in the Rain

  1. This is for a Poem a Day competition where I could choose from three prompts. Instead I decided to find a way to incorporate all three.
    It had to be about high school sweethearts, include the words weatherproof and waxy and had to be an Eintou poem which is:

    The poem has 7 lines.

    Rhyme and meter are not required

    There are two ways to write an Eintou, according to syllable count, or word count

    The structure is as follows:
    line 1: 2 syllables or words
    line 2: 4 syllables or words
    line 3: 6 syllables or words
    line 4: 8 syllables or words
    line 5: 6 syllables or words
    line 6: 4 syllables or words
    line 7: 2 syllables or words

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